The Pirate-Covenant War! Pt. One

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

Do you leik it?

Si, it's better than the last one
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25%
No, it's more horrid than the Nazis!
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25%
It's Asi-Asi...
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50%
 
Total votes : 4

Postby dinoman666 » Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:47 pm

Pretty good, but you do know Spider Droids and Hailfire Droids are actual droids, not piloted, right? That, and a Frigate wouldn't use a ramp, it would use landing craft or a Gravity Lift (in the case of the CIS, landing craft).
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Postby Giratina93 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:03 am

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Curse you, Star Wars Battlefront II!
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Postby dinoman666 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:14 am

Don't believe everything in one Star Wars video game. :P Wookiepedia is a much better source.
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Postby Godzilla Forever » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:01 am

The horrible thing is the flood!!! HAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!

And, where's the Scarabs? anyways, good story.
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:41 pm

Godzilla Forever wrote:I'm just pointing it out so someone more picky doesn't get all pissy about it.


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Read a few chapters. It's entertaining.
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