That was interesting. Though one wonders how an enormous lizard thing and a random stranger were able to enter a town, armed to the teeth, without attracting any real attention.
I enjoyed the chapter.
Godzilla Forever wrote:Sorry about that. Sometimes I get overzealous when I type.
And the fact I haven't written a story outside of this site doesn't make typing one easier....
But, thanks for the constructive criticism! Also, what's a niggle?
A niggle, is a small little point of annoyance. It's a very minor complaint.
Basically, there are lots of little points of annoyance in and around your writing, probably down to your inexperience with writing stuff like this on a keyboard.