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Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:04 am
by Godzilla Forever
Thank you. It took me a while to develop Charybdis' character, and I will continue the story sooner or later.
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Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:12 am
by Godzilla Forever
Chapter 6's up! Here we go.....
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Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:27 pm
by Godzilla Forever
Chatper 7's up! I got bored and decided to write up a little something..... I'll be introducing a new character soon........
Re: Shadows of The Abyss
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Tue Apr 19, 2011 3:24 am
by Godzilla Forever
New chapter is up after many, many months.
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Mon May 02, 2011 7:07 pm
by Doc 42
That was interesting. Though one wonders how an enormous lizard thing and a random stranger were able to enter a town, armed to the teeth, without attracting any real attention.
I enjoyed the chapter.
Godzilla Forever wrote:Sorry about that. Sometimes I get overzealous when I type.
And the fact I haven't written a story outside of this site doesn't make typing one easier....
But, thanks for the constructive criticism! Also, what's a niggle?
A niggle, is a small little point of annoyance. It's a very minor complaint.
Basically, there are lots of little points of annoyance in and around your writing, probably down to your inexperience with writing stuff like this on a keyboard.
Re: Shadows of The Abyss
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:00 am
by Godzilla Forever
What's this? Another chapter? Indeed it is!
Re: Shadows of The Abyss
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Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:43 am
by Giratina93
So far, this intrests me quite abit! This is quite the good read, though the inconsistancy of time tense is a little... rattling.
keep up the good work, G4E!
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Tue Sep 20, 2011 4:14 am
by Godzilla Forever
Chapter ten is up. it's a simple chapter, just meant to kinda get the characters together.
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:21 am
by Giratina93
Keep going, G4E! This story is coming togethe quite nicely...
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:25 am
by Godzilla Forever
Thanks. Might try to update it this week. We'll see, though.
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:00 pm
by Doc 42
Clichéd, ridiculous, but all the more enjoyable for it. Nice easy reading. I liked this.
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:23 pm
by Godzilla Forever
@ doc: Thanks! Was aiming for cliched (I'm lazy, I know XP), but I didn't expect ridiculous.
Re: Shadows of the Abyss
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Tue Oct 04, 2011 10:46 pm
by Doc 42
ridiuclous often goes hand in hand with cliché.
For example, the 5 guards all managing to decapitate each other when chary ducked. Depending on the tone of the story it can be a good thing or a very bad thing. In this it's the former, it suits the atmosphere.