Through the Eyes of the Shadow

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

Postby Doc 42 » Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:44 pm

Great chapter! Much better than the preveious ones.(which were slightly vague and weak) I look foreward to reading his opinion on Sandstorms arrival (Anger......Must......Kill.....)
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Postby The Kingpin » Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:03 am

nice so far, TT. very good. lol...throwing his trust to anyone who spoke to him....if only any of you [besides Doc and TT] what is to become of Crusher in the future...

cant wait for the next few chapters...
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Postby Iceking » Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:37 am

these chapters are very good. i like how darkness says that if he hadn't fought with steeltalon, she wouldn't be his mate.
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Postby C S » Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:48 am

the ultimate irony....this should be a movie...........
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Postby Iceking » Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:35 pm

it would be very cool to have a movie made out of this.
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:45 pm

No it wouldnt. A film with intelligent dinos would never be respected.
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Postby Shadow » Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:28 am

I like it so far. When will the next few chapters ready?
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:12 pm

Next chapter posted.

YES, I am aware that its not as long as some of the others, but its still pritty good (no MAJOR events happened, besides Onarus's death, at this time...)

The next one will be alot longer and more descriptive...
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Postby dinoman666 » Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:26 pm

Cool. Sounds like the next chapter will go well.
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Postby Hopeflower » Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:27 pm

Niiice...cool story so far (can't believe you said mine were better!)
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Postby Doc 42 » Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:34 pm

Great I was wondering how Darkness actually came to be living there, now I know. *Gulps* Beleive me when I tell you, that when Sandstorm arrived at that cave, on that particular night. I had NO idea who anybody was, besides Steeltalon. What I Sandstorm knew, was pretty much all I knew. Thats what made it so great! (Although I now know that TT wanted to decapitate me that day, So I doubt his thoughts on Sandstorm are going to be..... "pleasant")
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Postby Iceking » Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:51 pm

the new chapter is very good.
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:32 am

Next chapter, postified.

Cudos to HF for giving me the titles for "Dangerous Love" and "Disbelief".
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Postby Hopeflower » Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:40 am

Nice chapter. Lol, he's so jealous he can't see the truth!
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:44 am

Great Chapter, he REALLY didnt like Sandstorm ^_^
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:37 pm

Next chapter posted.

End of FanFic!

Once ISS grows a bit more, I'll make a sequal. Until then, this is it ^_^
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:40 pm

Great Fan fic, I enjoyed the whole thing. I love the last sentence. It really gives a sense of closure to the whole story.
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Postby Hopeflower » Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:40 pm

Yay for the end of the story! Nice ending, btw. ^_^

(Now you'll be pestering ME to update more than ever. -_-')
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Postby TyrantTR » Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:50 am

Finnally got off my buttox and read it. (Partly cause I was board and partly because I'm taken over the forum again.) Good stuff TT. Good stuff. Sequal? I hope it's as good as this one, we all know sequals sometimes don't go to well.
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