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Wed Jul 18, 2007 11:44 pmby Doc 42
Great chapter! Much better than the preveious ones.(which were slightly vague and weak) I look foreward to reading his opinion on Sandstorms arrival (Anger......Must......Kill.....)
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Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:03 amby The Kingpin
nice so far, TT. very good. lol...throwing his trust to anyone who spoke to him....if only any of you [besides Doc and TT] what is to become of Crusher in the future...
cant wait for the next few chapters...
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Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:37 amby Iceking
these chapters are very good. i like how darkness says that if he hadn't fought with steeltalon, she wouldn't be his mate.
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Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:48 amby C S
the ultimate irony....this should be a movie...........
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Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:35 pmby Iceking
it would be very cool to have a movie made out of this.
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Thu Jul 19, 2007 7:45 pmby Doc 42
No it wouldnt. A film with intelligent dinos would never be respected.
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Fri Jul 20, 2007 9:28 amby Shadow
I like it so far. When will the next few chapters ready?
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:12 pmby TyrannoTitan
Next chapter posted.
YES, I am aware that its not as long as some of the others, but its still pritty good (no MAJOR events happened, besides Onarus's death, at this time...)
The next one will be alot longer and more descriptive...
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:26 pmby dinoman666
Cool. Sounds like the next chapter will go well.
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:27 pmby Hopeflower
Niiice...cool story so far (can't believe you said mine were better!)
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:34 pmby Doc 42
Great I was wondering how Darkness actually came to be living there, now I know. *Gulps* Beleive me when I tell you, that when Sandstorm arrived at that cave, on that particular night. I had NO idea who anybody was, besides Steeltalon. What I Sandstorm knew, was pretty much all I knew. Thats what made it so great! (Although I now know that TT wanted to decapitate me that day, So I doubt his thoughts on Sandstorm are going to be..... "pleasant")
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Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:51 pmby Iceking
the new chapter is very good.
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Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:32 amby TyrannoTitan
Next chapter, postified.
Cudos to HF for giving me the titles for "Dangerous Love" and "Disbelief".
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Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:40 amby Hopeflower
Nice chapter. Lol, he's so jealous he can't see the truth!
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Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:44 amby Doc 42
Great Chapter, he REALLY didnt like Sandstorm ^_^
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:37 pmby TyrannoTitan
Next chapter posted.
End of FanFic!
Once ISS grows a bit more, I'll make a sequal. Until then, this is it ^_^
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:40 pmby Doc 42
Great Fan fic, I enjoyed the whole thing. I love the last sentence. It really gives a sense of closure to the whole story.
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Thu Aug 02, 2007 6:40 pmby Hopeflower
Yay for the end of the story! Nice ending, btw. ^_^
(Now you'll be pestering ME to update more than ever. -_-')
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:50 amby TyrantTR
Finnally got off my buttox and read it. (Partly cause I was board and partly because I'm taken over the forum again.) Good stuff TT. Good stuff. Sequal? I hope it's as good as this one, we all know sequals sometimes don't go to well.