Dungeon Siege

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

Dungeon Siege

Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 4:40 pm

Okay, this based on the game “Dugeon Siege”. Comments are welcome.

Chapter 1: A dying friend
“Help me!” Jondar looked up from his work and was horrified to see an old man stumbling towards him. The man was clutching his side where blood was seeping from a wound. He ran to the bridge where the man was lying, dropping his rake as he went. “The krug… are attacking!I…couldn’t hold them back!”Spluttered the man as he coughed “You have long been a friend of old Norick… go to StroneBridge….find Gyorn…. If the krug have elsewhere betrayed us.. your bravery will be needed by the king.”' With that Norick coughed and drew his last breath.

Chapter 2: Collecting supplies
Jondar dropped Norick’s head and rose, a few tears dripping from his bright blue eyes. He pulled out a dagger from his pocket and stared at the blade. It was sharp and sturdy and would make an exellent weapon against the krug. Krug were savage brutes and, although normally peaceful something must have stirred them up to make them act like they do. Jondar stared at his knife, anger rising inside him. He turned and ran to his house, cursing under his breath. He pushed the door open and strode over to his cupboard where he pulled out a bow. It wasn’t beatiful, it wasn’t powerful but it would be used if he needed to. He placed the bow in it’s case and strode out, slamming the door behind him.


Chapter 3: Starting the journey
Jondar ran towards a burning building to find a krug holding a burning torch standing next to a dead cow. Jondar charged and ducked as the krug threw it’s torch at him. It missed and landed on the ground a few feet away from him. Setting the grass around it alight and lighting up the area. The krug was now without weapons and thrown a punch at Jondar, who dodged out of the way just in time. Jondar punched the krug in the face and stabbed it in the chest, impaling it’s heart and killing it. The krug fell with a snort of pain and Jondar pulled the blood-covered dagger out of the body and saw that the fire was now creeping onto the fence. Jondar quickly ran towards two barrels and smashed one with his dagger. Wood flew everywhere and Jondar heard the clink of gold hitting the ground. Jondar picked it up and counted the gold. There was fourteen pieces.

Chapter 4: The start of war
Jondar stashed the gold in his pocket and smashed the other barrel to find a scroll. Curious, Jondar picked it up read the words outloud “me sa geh zas aop pue ZAP!” Jondar whispered the words and thrown his fist in the air. A streak of lightning came from his fingertips and struck a nearby krug. Jondar walked over to the body and saw that it had been burnt, not by fire but by lightning. Two nearby krug ran out from hiding and stared at Jondar. Slowly, he pulled his bow out of it’s case and drawn an arrow. The krug were fascinated by the strange weapon and stared in bewilderment at Jondar, not knowing that he was aiming at the largest of the two.

Chapter 5: An arrow is fired
Jondar steadily pulled back the string that held the arrow in place, focusing his shot on the krug’s heart. Jondar knew the best way to kill an upright creature was to destroy the heart. When the heart is destroyed the owner falls. Jondar pulled the arrow further back and suddenly, let go of the arrow and quickly loaded another arrow into his bow. He fired the other arrow at the smaller krug who realized that it was in danger and charged. It was too late, the arrow struck home and thrown the krug to the ground. The body lay next to another krug who was also dead, impaled by an arrow from a bow.



Chapter 6: The Phrak Forest
Jondar did not hesitate to search the bodies for anything of use to him. As he searched he found a small container full of red liquid. Jondar knew this was a health potion and that it would help him in the most critical of times. Jondar did not find anything else that would be of use to him. He set off down a dusty path leading to a ledge and a rope on one side, a small cliff face on the other. Jondar ran down the path and seen a Phrak hovering in front of him. Phrak’s were like giant mosquitoes only bigger and more vicious. Jondar whispered the words again “me sa geh zas aop pue ZAP!” A streak of lightning struck the Phrak which squeaked and exploded. Jondar shielded his head from pieces of a Phrak by holding his hands in front of his head. He continued to find more…

Chapter 7: The Swarm
Jondar saw at least 12 Phraks around a more blueish Phrak which, upon the sight of Jondar fired a blue blast at him. The blast missed by milimetres and made Jondar’s face turn a slight blue. “That Phrak must fire cold blasts.” He thought as the rest of the Phraks started to stare at him with creepy red eyes. Jondar whispered the words multiple times “me sa geh zas aop pue ZAP!” Several beams of lightning streaked towards the Phraks killing 6 of them and making 4 of them scatter. All that was left was the blueish Phrak and two others…

Chapter 8: The Ice Phrak
Jondar tensed himself, ready for battle. Without warning the blue Phrak fired 3 blasts from its mouth “me sa geh zas aop pue ZAP!” He whispered as an iceball came hurtling towards him. Lightning shot out from his fingers and struck the ball of ice making it explode, kiling the two Phraks and knocking the other two iceballs off couse, sending one flying into a tree and the other smashing into the ground. Jondar quickly pulled out his bow and fired multiple arrows, all aimed the Phrak remaining. He could not possibly miss…

Chapter 9: The Ice Phrak’s Fall
Two of the arrows missed as the Ice Phrak hovered about, dodging the arrows and practically making fun of Jondar. Luckily, the Ice Phrak did not notice the third arrow heading straight for it’s abdomen. The arrow pierced the abdomen and green liquid oozed out from the Phrak. Jondar knew he had won and that the Ice Phrak was no more. The Ice Phrak squeeked as it’s blood poured through the hole in its body. Struggling to fly it was helpless as it slowly lowered to the groung falling into a pool of it’s own blood. Jondar dashed past the dying Phrak and ran past numerous bushes he could have swore that were moving.

Chapter 10: The Forbidding Cave
Jondar ran until he seen something out of the corner of his eye. It was a cave, dark and forbidding. Jondar knew he should leave it but curiosity took over and he slowly walked over to the entrance. He heard a low growling noise and stealthily walked into the cave. The growling became louder the closer he came to a passage. Jondar steadily poked his head round and saw a pair of gleaming yellow eyes staring back…

Chapter 11: All Will Be Revealed
Jondar kept contact with the eyes, gleaming and lighting up the cave in which it was standing. Jondar stepped back and saw 4 huge, padded feet, hairy legs and body and a snarling head, attached to a muscular neck, a thick, strong body and four legs like small trees. It became clear to Jondar that he was facing a bear. “This is just what I need.” He thought, unnerved now he saw what was staring at him. Without warning the bear lunged at Jondar but missed as he dived to the side of the passage. The bear got up and shook it’s head, confused at what had just happened…

Chapter 12: The Death Of YellowEye
Jondar scurried around the passage trying to find something more powerful than his dagger. He seen something shimmering and dived for it just as the bear, now called YellowEye leaped and met a wall. Jondar picked the blade up and saw that it glowed with a strange yellow light. The same colour as the eyes. Jondar wasted no time at staring in awe at the blade and he quickly charged at YellowEye who lunged again. Jondar dodged but the claws had scratched his face and he was now bleeding. He could feel the blood running down his cheek and past his mouth. Stealthily he climbed up onto a ledge and watched YellowEye pound around,looking for him. When YellowEye passed underneath him he jumped, blade in hand, facing downwards, aiming to kill YellowEye in a single blow. The blood was flying everywhere as the blade plunged into YellowEye, killing him instantly and dropping something that seemed to be clothing of some kind.

Chapter 13: Altan’s Leather
Jondar walked up to the clothing and saw writing, faint, but still readable. He read the words “Altan’s Leather” A few moments later he was wearing the leather, sword in hand. He ran out the cave and continued on his way to StoneBridge. After a few moments of running he came across a small lake and yet more krug. “It seems that the krug have pets…” He said to himself while pulling out his bow. He wanted to maybe decrease the krug numbers so they wouldn’t be too much of a threat…

Chapter 14: Lake Of Killers
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When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Re: Dungeon Siege

Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:13 pm

i like it. this gives me a picture of what is happening.
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Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:21 pm

Thank you.
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:25 pm

my pleasure.
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Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:13 pm

Chapters two and three are up!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:50 pm

i like them.
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Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:35 pm

5 & 6 are ready!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:37 pm

very nice chapters. :D
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Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:59 pm

7 & 8 are ready too!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:02 pm

very cool. when will the next be ready?
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Postby Shadow » Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:38 pm

Chapter 9 is up!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby Iceking » Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:39 pm

i like the cahpter. i think the title suits it well.
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Postby Shadow » Thu Jul 19, 2007 8:29 am

Chapters 10, 11, 12 and thirteen are ready!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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