Divided Loyalties

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

Postby Hopeflower » Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:30 pm

yayz! Next chappie's up, thanks for the comments peoples.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:40 pm

Awesome! Very interesting chapter indeed. The murder is close to being revealed.

Great Work, HF.
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Postby Doc 42 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:54 pm

Stream clan are going to have to some pretty smooth talking to get out of this one. Nice chappie, brings us closer to the truth and away from the mysterys
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Postby Hopeflower » Mon Aug 13, 2007 8:36 pm

Next chappie's up, thanks for the comments peoples.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Mon Aug 13, 2007 8:43 pm

Awesome! Violent, I like...

Great Work.
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Postby Doc 42 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 8:44 pm

Wow that was tense, and brutal, ALL the clan leaders are dead..... wow...
Awesome chapter, gory aswell. Cant wait for the next one (damn tension!!!)
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Postby Hopeflower » Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:29 pm

Wow, I must've gotten over my writer's block already...

Next chappie's up, thanks for the comments.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:34 pm

Awesome!

The powers are revealed...

Great work.
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Postby Doc 42 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 9:41 pm

Wow! That happened quick.
One minute there is an epic battle with fire and ice, next minute "OH **** A FLOOD" Cool chapter, intense. Probably the Climax of the story...
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Postby Hopeflower » Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:11 pm

Well, this chapter made me a bit uneasy. After all...well I'll just let you peoples read it.

Thanks for the comments!
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Wed Aug 15, 2007 6:17 pm

Great chapter...Though sorta sad...Poor Fireclaw.

Great work, HF.
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Postby Doc 42 » Wed Aug 15, 2007 7:16 pm

Poor fireclaw indeed, but now evil murderer doesnt stand a chance, he is as good as dead. cool chapter
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Postby Hopeflower » Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:45 pm

Sixteen chapters left, four to go.

Thanks for commenting peoples, and I hope that when the end does come you're satisfied with it.
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"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

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Postby TyrannoTitan » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:05 am

Awesome. The baddie is finally killed.

Great Work HF.
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:12 am

It had the feel of a "last chapter" kindve odd that there is more to come. neithertheless Cool Chapter. I have enjoyed the story so far and hope to enjoy the rest
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Postby Hopeflower » Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:52 pm

Next chappie's up, thanks for the comments.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:59 pm

Cool Chapter. New clan leaders, it seems. Revenge in the making?

Great work.
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Postby Doc 42 » Fri Aug 17, 2007 3:02 pm

Well it seems they aren't all safe yet. Im intrestted in these nine lives, cant wait for the next chappie
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Postby Hopeflower » Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:39 pm

next chappie's up. I MIGHT do a sequel.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross

"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:43 pm

Interesting Chapter....

Great Work.
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