hmmm *imagines scene*
*Forest is burning all around* Fireclaw: "It wasnt me! honest!"
Divided Loyalties
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by Hopeflower » Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:24 pm
Next chappie's up! It's a bit longer than the last...and some parts were left out...on...purpose... ^_^'
Thanks for the comments, the next chapter is the last.
Thanks for the comments, the next chapter is the last.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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by Hopeflower » Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:35 am
Finally done! This story was interesting to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it...and, well, the only thing I got left to say is look out for a sequel. I just might write one.
(Let me know if I left anyone out of the list at the end.)
(Let me know if I left anyone out of the list at the end.)
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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by Doc 42 » Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:56 am
Great story, and an intresting ending, I kindve thought Blacksoul shouldv'e stayed with Bramble Clan, after all, Stream Clan kicked him out. Speaking of Blacksoul you left him outve the bit at the end where you list all the cats. 
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by Hopeflower » Wed Aug 22, 2007 1:50 am
Durr. -smacks forehead with hand- I knew I was forgetting someone! Thanks Doc.
"Gotta have a little sadness once in a while so you know when the good times come."
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
"Talent is a pursued interest. In other words, anything that you're willing to practice, you can do." ~ Bob Ross
"The future is always uncertain and painful but it must be lived." ~ Unknown
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by Shadow » Wed Aug 22, 2007 9:16 am
Great FanFic HF. I hope you'll write a sequel!
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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