Singing RPG Characters! =O

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

Singing RPG Characters! =O

Postby Hopeflower » Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:18 pm

I started a series of SongFics. First is Steely, then I'll be taking requests. ^_^

Steeltalon- Crushed

Steeltalon padded into the center of a clearing, moonlight washing over her and giving the landscape an eerie look. “What am I gonna do,” she breathed, turning her gaze to the sky. “Nothing will ever be the same between Darkness and I. Mother, tell me what to do!”

Her tail lashed once, and then she began to sing softly to herself, knowing she was alone and no one would ever hear her.

“I told myself today was going to be the day
No more excuses, cause i knew exactly what to say
Was gonna make my play, but just like yesterday
My mind erased, and I let the moment slip away
Another night got me sitting here all on my own
Picking up the phone but I can't get passed the dial tone
Wracking my brain, going insane, again and again
I can't keep going this way…”

She took a deep breath, fighting tears. She went on,

“Crushed by the sweetest lips I never kissed
And your finger tips and the warmest touch
that i've always missed
Crushed by the softest hands i've never held
Probably never tell,
you're the strongest love that i ever felt
Crushed that I haven't ever let you know
how it always goes, cause I lose my nerve
whenever you get close
And so i'm left, short of breath
with that heavy feeling in my chest
Baby i'm so crushed

So I tell myself, that tommorrows gonna be the day
And I keep telling myself that i'm gonna find a way
And I won't be afraid just like yesterday,
won'twalk away, never gonna let another chance slip away
cause i gotta know, whichever way it's gonna go
risk my heart and soul cause there can never be no more
Wracking my brain, going insane, again and again
I can't keep going this way

Crushed by the sweetest lips I never kissed
And your finger tips and the warmest touch
that i've always missed
Crushed by the softest hands i've never held
Probably never tell,
you're the strongest love that i ever felt
Crushed that I haven't ever let you know
how it always goes, cause I lose my nerve
whenever you get close
And so i'm left, short of breath
with that heavy feeling in my chest
Baby i'm so crushed

crushing i'm so into you, don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you i don't just what to do
crushing i'm so into you don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you ohh, I
crushing i'm so into you, don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you
and so i'm left short of breath, with heavy feeling in my chest
baby i'm so crushed

Crushed by the sweetest lips I never kissed
And your finger tips and the warmest touch
that i've always missed
Crushed by the softest hands i've never held
Probably never tell,
you're the strongest love that i ever felt
Crushed that I haven't ever let you know
how it always goes, cause I lose my nerve
whenever you get close
And so i'm left, short of breath
with that heavy feeling in my chest
Baby i'm so crushed

crushing i'm so into you don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you(and i wanna stress that i always missed)
(crushed)
crushing i'm so into you don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you(strongest love i ever felt)
(crushed)
crushing i'm so into you don't know what i'm gonna do
gotta find a way to you

and so i'm left short of breath, with that heavy feeling in my chest
baby i'm so (crushed)
(crushed)”

Steeltalon shook her head sadly. The last words of the song were a low murmur. “Yes, baby, I’m so…crushed….”

The moon shone overhead, shedding it’s light over the off-white figure watching Steeltalon. Silver shook her head sympathetically.

“Males are so stupid,” the off-white raptor breathed as she turned and vanished into the forest’s shadows.

Steeltalon/Darkness- Goodbye, Love
Note: Ash is a character I made up for the conflict of the song.. ^_^


Steeltalon looked at Darkness, puzzled.

“It’s true you’re leaving this group because of your past?” she asked.

“It’s true,” Darkness said, “I’m leaving for the life of a rogue. It’s true you’re with this yuppie scum!” he hissed at the male beside Steeltalon.

“You said you’d never speak to him again,” Ash whispered to Steeltalon.

“Not now,” she hissed back at him.

Silver stalked out of her den and glared at Ash, snarling, “Who said that you have any say in who she says things to at all?”

“Yeah,” Sandstorm commented.

“Who said that you should stick your nose in other people’s--”

Ruby was interrupted from an outburst from Silver, “Who said I was talking to you?!”

“We used to have this fight each night,” Ruby snarled, “She never admit I existed!”

Steeltalon turned away from Ash and pointed to Darkness with her tail, “He was the same way. He was always run away, hit the road, don’t commit. You’re full of sh*t!”

“Steeltalon!” Ash said, trying to calm her.

“She’s in denial!” Ruby hissed.

“He’s in denial!” Steeltalon repeated.

“Didn’t give an inch when I gave a mile!” Ruby snarled.

Steeltalon turned to Darkness and said, “I gave a mile!”

“Gave a mile to who?” Darkness spat.

Darktalon and Sandstorm looked at each other as their friends drifted further apart, “Come on guys, chill!”

“I’d be happy to die for a taste of what Shadowleaf had!” Silver and Steeltalon said at the same time, “Someone to mentor. Unafraid to say, ‘I love you!’”

Darkness got Steeltalon’s attention with a rough scratch on the shoulder, “Oh, your words are nice, Steeltalon, but love’s not a three way street! You’ll never share in love until you love yourself, I should know!”

Darktalon jumped between them to stop anymore sprawling and solemnly said, “You all said you’d be cool today, so please, for my sake. I can’t believe she’s gone. I can’t believe you’re going.” he pointed to Darkness and then looked at everyone in the clearing, “I can’t believe this family must die. Shadowleaf helped us to believe in love. I can’t believe you disagree.”

And as tears filled their eyes they all sighed, “I can’t believe this is goodbye.”

-------------------------------------------------------

“I hear that Rainus is waiting for you out west,” Ash growled to Darkness.

“He’s the best,” he replied, only half paying attention and then his thoughts snapped back to Steeltalon, “How could she?”

“How could you let her go?” Ash said.

“You just don’t know.”

“How could we lose Shadowleaf? Maybe you’ll see why when you stop escaping you pain! At least now if you try,” Ash began to raise his voice, “Shadowleaf’s death won’t be in vain!”

“Her death IS in vain,” Darkness spat.

“Are you insane? There’s so much to care about. There’s me there’s Steeltalon!”

“Steeltalon’s got her baggage, too.”

“So do you!”

Darkness spun around to look Ash in the eyes with his menacing amber gaze, “Who are you to tell me what I know? What to do?”

“A friend,” Ash said calmly.

“But who, Ash, are you? Ash has got his mate. They say Ash lives for his mate. And Ash is in love with his mate! Ash hides in his mate.”

“From what?”

“From facing your failure, facing your loneliness, facing the fact you live a lie.”

Ash was about to say something but Darkness stopped him with, “Yes you live a lie! Tell you why! you’re always breeching not be numb, when that’s how you thrive! You pretend to create and observe when you really detach from feeling alive--”

“Perhaps it’s because I’m the one of us to survive!” Ash interrupted.

Darkness narrowed his eyes and spat, “Poor baby.”

“Steeltalon still loves you,” Ash said, “Are you really jealous? Or afraid that Steeltalon’s weak?”

“Steeltalon did look pale…” Darkness trailed off as he remembered Steeltalon’s illness.

“Steeltalon’s gotten thin! Steeltalon’s running out of time, and you’re running out the door!”

“No more!” Darkness screeched, “I’ve got to go.”

“HEY!” Ash called to him as he started to leave the clearing, “For someone who’s always been let down, who’s heading out of town?”

“For someone who longs for friends of his own, who’s with his mate,” Darkness spat back, “Alone.”

As he took another step out of the clearing he saw Steeltalon standing there, tears in her eyes.

“You heard?” he asked.

“Every word,” she replied. “You don’t want baggage without lifetime guarantee. You don’t want to watch me die, I just came to say goodbye love! Goodbye love! Came to say goodbye love! Goodbye. Just came to say goodbye love! Goodbye love, goodbye love. Goodbye…”

Darkness pushed Steeltalon aside and made his way toward the edge of the clearing. Ash went over to Steeltalon to comfort her but she flinched and pushed him away.

“Please don’t touch me, understand I’m scared,” she said, “I need to go away.”

“I know a place. A clinic. A rehab,” Ash suggested.

“Maybe…could you?”

“I’ll pay.”

Steeltalon called out to her previous mate, “Goodbye love! Goodbye love. Came to say goodbye love! Goodbye. Just came to say goodbye love! Goodbye love! Goodbye love. Hello, disease…” she coughed and collapsed to the floor as Ash tried to nudge her up.
Last edited by Hopeflower on Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:55 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Fri Nov 23, 2007 6:48 pm

Cool idea, combining songs with RPG posts made specifically for the songfic.

Great work.
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Postby Hopeflower » Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:01 pm

Steeltalon/Darkness- Goodbye, Love is up. ^_^
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Postby TyrannoTitan » Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:38 pm

Pritty cool. A little confusing, but good none the less. Good work.
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Postby C S » Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:44 pm

yea. There are more than one rpg's in there?
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Postby Hopeflower » Fri Dec 28, 2007 1:14 am

I found the story on DeviantArt and put in RPG characters in the place of Brambleclaw, Squirrelflight, Firestar, Sandstorm, Jaypaw and Leafpool.
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