the lost world:chaotic creatures

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the lost world:chaotic creatures

Postby Iceking » Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:26 pm

this is a lost world jurassic park fan fic that has dinosaurs that appeared in the lost world chaos toyline. the tale begins after ingen left isla sorna to the dinosaurs. however, they experimented with dna of other prehistoric creatures as well and created very unusual hybrids.

chapter one:new hunter

A green mother parasaurolophus with black spots on it's right leg and a youngster close to it lowered it's head and began to feed on the lower branches of a fern, the leaves on the plant being consumed with ease. the sun was shining over isla sorna and there wasn't a single cloud in the sky, a very beautiful morning. the calls of birds could be heard nearby, making the area around the para rather peaceful looking. however, a hidden creature watched patiently, it's orange eyes observing everything around it. it waited for the younger para to stray too far from it's mother, giving the carnivore the meal it was trying to get. the younger herbivore wandered closer to the location of the unseen stalker and this was enough. silently, the carnivore lept forward and landed on the back of it's target, a claw finding the throat and sliting it with ease, causing crimson blood to flow form the wound. the adult para turned and upon seeing the carnivore, turned and ran. the creature that had killed the young para looked like a velociraptor and at the smae time, not like one. much of it's body was raptor like, but on it's arms, the back of it's neck and tail where what looked like large white quils. the creature was a velociraptoryx, a hybrid between a raptor and archyoptery. with a content growl, the hybrid began to tear flesh from the neck of it's victim, feeling satisfied with the reeward of a meal after an hour long search for prey.

chapter 2:careful and alert

The velociraptoryx that had just killed the young para was known as crimson stripe due to a red stripe on his back and top of his head that went to his tail. the rest of his head was a dark orange, his body grey in color, his legs and feet black and his tail was green. He didn't have a terriotry for himself, but he planned on finding a place that would keep him safe from the larger carnivores that would think of him as their next meal. he had torn two pieces flesh from the neck of the dead juvenile para and his teeth were slightly coated with blood. his yellow eyes carefully searched the jungle for a sign of something lurking close by might be ready to attack when he was about to take another bite from his kill. Crimson stripe wasn't foolish enough to think that he would be completley safe and he knew very well that some carnivores would search for an easy meal if they couldn't hunt or they simply were too lazy to do so.
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