Isla Cruces: Jurassic Island

Have you got a game, book or movie you'd like to make a story out of? Want to expand on a story or plot that stopped? Have an original idea for a story that you want to post somewhere? Here's where to do it. Basically an RPG where one player controls ALL characters in the story.

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Postby Doc 42 » Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:47 pm

ooooooooooooffffffff tooooooooooopiiiiiiiiiiiic

Go make a different topic and debate about it there, also, state where you are getting your info from, other wise this will turn into a "yes it is" "no it isnt" debate.

and take your time with the chapter
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Postby Evil Eye » Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:12 pm

o got it. anyway heres next ch
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Postby Evil Eye » Fri Jul 18, 2008 4:26 pm

like i said this chapter is a build up, so just to keep the suspense (and u guys interested), part of the next chapter:

A calculating eye glanced down from its high above watching position as the anxious troodons crowded around a specific patch of ground, slightly off color from the rest of it. The breeze didn’t make it move as it did other patches of grass either. The troodons were having no success infiltrating what they knew was a small passageway to a room for spying on them. They tried at first pushing it with their snouts, which were far too weak to do anything. Soon after, they progressed to pulling it up with their hands, which, at the beginning, seemed to be doing something, but turned out just as useless as the former, as their sharp claws eventually ripped through the pliable material.
Looking back to his position, he saw a small Jeep in the distance following a path toward their prison.
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Postby Evil Eye » Sat Jul 19, 2008 11:36 am

k here it is ch 4 enjoy :D
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Postby Doc 42 » Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:48 pm

Veeeeeeeery nice chapter. Good bit of fighting put in there :P
It was generally good, nice character development as well.
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Postby Evil Eye » Sun Jul 20, 2008 10:38 am

really it was that good? thx a lot! :D
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Postby Evil Eye » Tue Jul 22, 2008 8:31 am

next chapter is up :P
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Postby Doc 42 » Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:34 pm

Smart raptors.... But, they dont have guns :P
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