To capture an intel

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To capture an intel

Postby Raptor Llama » Fri May 15, 2009 11:21 pm

It was silent. Motionless. A patch of grass on one side by a giant wooden structure. On the other side of a wooden bridge, there was a giant metallic structure. Nothing breathed, nothing moved. Expect for a paper blowing in the breeze. It blew off the bridge and landed in the water below, then it was floating on the water. But then, soon after, it was again motionless.
Then, two metal gates flew up from each structure. Out of the wooden one, a man ran furiously out with a baseball bat, whistle, a hat, a headset, and a red shirt. He jumped high, landing on the top of the bridge. Bullets whizzed past him as a giant that came from the other gate, wearing a blue shirt, and holding a chaingun, which was the source of these bullets. They hit the wood, and splinters shot up every where. The first man was crouched, waiting. Then, the shooting stopped, as the giant began to grab another ammo belt and feed it in. The first man wasted no time, running, then jumping impossibly high over the giant. He heard the gunfire of his comrades behind him. He landed on the top of this structure, and saw a door. A bullet whizzed by him as he saw a man near him with a sniper. He quickly approached the sniper, grabbed his back, then hit the sniper in the head, shouting "Bonk!" as he did it. The man fell down, and he went into a corridor. He crouched as he saw several man rushing past him. Then, he saw the giant coming back. Quickly, he took his shotgun on him, aimed at the giant, and fired. The giant fell, and the man took out a can in the shape of an energy drink. It had "Bonk" written on it. He gulped it down, then ran impossibly fast down a metal corridor. He turned to a door to the left and saw a man with a gas mask and a flamethrower. It shot the fire at him. He whacked it with the bat, as the fire started burning. The man hit the fire, hoping to get it out. It eventually died down, leaving some burn marks on him. He ran up a metallic stair case, making some noise as he ascended him. He looked around, and saw a briefcase. Grinning, he ran toward it. Right as he entered the room, a turret started firing at him, by the wall of the room. He ran as the bullets whizzed past him, then took out his shotgun and shot at the turret once. Twice. It started sparking. He then looked toward the briefcase. It was gone! Frantically, he looked around, then let out a breath of relief. A comrade already got it! He was an engineer, with a construction hat and a wrench. He had the brief case in his other hand. The engineer approached the man, and said, "Evening, gent." Then, the man saw as the wrench became a knife that went right into his heart. Blood spattered out as his world went blank. The engineer morphed into a man with a blue mask and blue suit, with a knife in his hand. He put the briefcase back where it was and took the appearance of an engineer again...

If you know the game, you know, and if you don't, you don't. There's no in between.
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Postby Doc 42 » Thu May 28, 2009 3:09 pm

Team Fortress!
Was this a prologue or was it just supposed to be a short action scene?
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Postby Raptor Llama » Fri May 29, 2009 8:11 pm

Doc 42 wrote:Team Fortress!
Was this a prologue or was it just supposed to be a short action scene?


Correct! Well, Team Fortress 2. But still, correct enough, if that make any sense!
Yes, this story is supposed to just be a small action scene. Just a small little thing I wrote which was, in part, a product of boredom. So, this is a whole thing, unless I am persuaded to continue.
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