Knocking

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Knocking

Postby Doc 42 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 10:50 pm

I hear you knocking
And I open the door
The draft comes in
and blows about the rock
and around the mind

makes all cold
and my soul sick and old
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Re: Knocking

Postby Godzilla Forever » Wed Jun 15, 2011 12:48 am

Is it death? Nice poem, BTW.
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Re: Knocking

Postby Evil Eye » Wed Jun 15, 2011 4:42 am

Is it guilt, perhaps?
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Re: Knocking

Postby Doc 42 » Wed Jun 15, 2011 10:22 pm

Its sort of up to you. I didn't put thought into it, it's pretty much what I was feeling put straight to words.
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Re: Knocking

Postby Evil Eye » Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:31 am

Tis the great thing about arts like poetry or lyrics. How open to interpretation they are.
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