Some Poems

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Some Poems

Postby HorseGal » Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:24 am

The first one is a poem I wrote for school about a character in a book for freshmen year. ^_^

Why do they notice me?
Why do they picture me?
Why do they adore me?
Why do they talk to me?

Is it because I’m perfect?
It is because I’m pretty?
It seems like it

Why do they notice me?
Why can’t they see the real me?

It is because I am beautiful
Because I am perfect
But the truth is, that is not so

The second poem is a PotO poem. The main character, Christine is talking to Erik (The Phantom) and trying to lure him away from his world of solitude and darkness.
"Angel of Darkness"
Angel of Darkness, why do you cry?
Is it because of what the world has done?
Is it because you hope to wait and die?
My Angel of Music, don't try to run
Please let me show you the wonderful light
Leave the darkness and come away with me
Come away from the Music of the Night
Be the passionate man you long to be
Let me show you the love you never knew
My Angel of Darkness, I love you
"You alone can make my song take flight, help me make the music of the night."-Phantom POTO
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Postby Shadow » Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:18 pm

Nice, I like the second one. Sounds like she'll persuade him in the end.
When you want it the most there's no easy way out
When you're ready to go and your heart's left in doubt
Don't give up on your faith
Love comes to those who believe it
And that's the way it is
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Postby CRUSHER IS KING » Mon Feb 11, 2008 2:04 am

Very nice HG, I like them all.
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