My Red Rose

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My Red Rose

Postby Doc 42 » Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:50 pm

I wrote this poem about love while listening to Rosenrot. A song by Rammstein. Make of it what you will, unlike what I usually write, I made this ones meaning pretty obvious.

My Red Rose
I love you as I love a Rose.
I wander closer, entranced by your beauty
Yet you are unaware
As if I’m not there
I sing for you
Yet you reply with a honeybee’s sting.
I am drawn only closer I long for your trust
Yet your thorns scrawl and scratch till I burst
I love you and you love me.
Yet we trample and choke those around us.
Then you begin to wilt and your beauty dies
And with it, I begin my lies.
I tell you what you want to hear.
Only because what I desire still draws near.
I do not love you. My wilted repulsive rose, I throw you away
I go back out to the garden.
I brave the honeybees.
I pluck a new flower from your patch.
I place it within your Vase.

My Red Rose. This is my love.
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Postby Tediz » Tue Sep 23, 2008 8:07 am

Awwww.................Really? I'm you're Rose? ... Well I must be since no one else wants to reply to these things. Really some of these people take forever making these things you guys could at least take two minutes to say "that's cool" :? .........

It's not like you people are bad or anything.... These are pretty good.... I mean I'm not a romantic... Unlike Mr. Doc over here, he's obviously sooooome sorta' playa'.... lol... But I can tell this poem thing he made is well written...

Alright I've been here four days and I'm already talking to much.... Gonna go before the Mods already hate me
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Postby Doc 42 » Tue Sep 23, 2008 5:01 pm

Your talking to one :twisted:

Anyway, wasnt ment to be romantic. Just a rant about Roses. I mean, they perfectly symbolise a BAD relationship. Why are they so god damn romantic?!
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Postby Tediz » Wed Sep 24, 2008 3:01 am

... *Ears droop* ... Sorry..... I meant in a Dark way............. Just didn't see the need to say it :cry:
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Postby Evil Eye » Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:01 pm

you should get this published or go professional doc
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