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6 out of 5, poem project

PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:53 pm
by Zephyr
Poem i wrote in school and got a 6 out of 5 on
and it sounds Emo, i didnt plan on it sounding that way

(no title)

The prodigy of time
The rancor of darkness
The proximity of demise
Civilization precipitates

Mankind must recant
for our past faults
Lack of prudence
Ramification begins

We were quixotic
for the perfect world
too consumed to be queroluos
we are a prodigal race
and for that we suffer

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 12:48 pm
by Doc 42
Cool poem, I got its meaning.
though each line is too short for my likeing, I would perfer if it was less divided.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:16 am
by Zephyr
Thats the way i had to write it the teacher wouldnt let us any other way

PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:40 am
by TyrannoTitan
It does sound a bit...depressing, but it speaks the truth none the less. Humans suck :P

Its good though.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:36 pm
by Anaclagon
nice interestings big words..My parents might get worried if I wrote something like that though @_@