Howl

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Howl

Postby Shade » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:35 am

Howl, for sadness.
Howl, for joy.
Howl, because you're excited.
Howl, because you cry.

Howl, to let the world hear your voice.
Howl, to set yourself free.
Howl, because you believe.
Howl, to see yourself clearly.

Howl, to the moon, and stars, and sky.
Howl, to let them know you're alive.
Howl, because you care.
Howl, because you love.

Howl, just to be different.
Howl, to let them know you're the same.
Howl, to be you.
Howl, to be true.
Last edited by Shade on Sun Jan 04, 2009 9:15 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Postby Tediz » Sun Jan 04, 2009 7:45 am

I like it.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:02 am

hmm...i have trouble seeing it as poetry, but it doesn't rhyme well enough to work as a song. interesting, but not quite....what's the word.....influencial...no...powerful....no. not sure. i just can't visualise any kind of scene, and that kinda takes away from it's potential...
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Postby Zephyr » Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:58 am

poetry doesnt need to rhyme or have elaborate scenes drawn out in your mind poetry comes from the heart and soul or in Poe's case insanity

thats what makes it the way it is

i love it
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Postby C S » Sun Jan 04, 2009 3:02 pm

Poe wasn't insane, KP's not insane (hopefully) yet he can make you a visulise a slaughter in.....disturbing detail....

Think the poem describe's a wolf's usage of a howl...
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Postby Shade » Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:10 am

Good one Compy, you get a gold star. :D
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Postby UltraGrunt117 » Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:44 am

Better than my poem :P
Because I havn't got any :P
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