by DI7789 » Sat Jul 07, 2007 10:27 pm
Hm...thats a nice story, here's mine:
A family move into an old house, there is the husband, he is furious with his daughter for going out with someone he doesn't approve of, the wife, who supports her daughter, and the daughter, lets call her Jane.
Jane has a large argument with her father and eventually, her boyfriend dumps her, all three are furious at one another. The next day, Jane goes to see a neighbour, an old woman, for advice, but all she gets is a warning:
"Be careful, 25 years ago a girl quarrelled with her boyfriend here and the boyfriend burned down the house, killing the girl's entire family, then he committed suicide and people believe his ghost haunts your house..."
Jane listens, then later that night, as she slept, she felt a presence near her bed, she wakes up screaming and a small chair nearby creaks, as if someone is getting off of it, but the room is empty apart from herself. Her mum arrives first and she comforts her daughter, soon after the father arrives and believes that it was her ex-boyfriend. Later that night, the neighbour, feeling very concerned because she has heard the screams too, he hid behind a tree and watched the house.
After midnight, the neighbour still hasn't left, she sees a figure wearing a hoodie and jeans, run to the front door with a can of petrol in their hand, the neighbour calls the police, assuming it to be the ex-boyfriend. The figure lights a match just as the police turn up, they order the person to turn around. The mysterious person obeys.
It is Jane, she flips back her hood to reveal that her eyes were bright blue and glowing, they lit up the ground in front of her, she puts out the match and is arrested.
It is here that the story ends, so what really happened? Was she being controlled by the ghost, maybe that explains her eyes, was she angry at her father, did she feel alone now that her boyfriend had left and decided to take her revenge? Decide for yourself...
"Its like I was attacked by some kind of...dinosaur"
-Regina, not realising what this sentence meant for her future
"You are the most insolent child I have ever had the misfortune to teach!"
"Thank you"
-Catherine Tate and David Tennant Comic Relief 2007