by chook151 » Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:16 am
PS.im in uros territory, and sorry KP, i thought you where at the lake.
sickle ran to uro and hissed:"hes coming, father!" , uro, looked, he saw the tyrranosaur, he roared to a nearby carcha:"get shard ready for battle, im getting that territory no matter what it takes!"(shard is uros brother)
uro looked at crusher, he muttered to himself::"crusher..... he will perish just as the gigas zor and hex did....."
flash saw exile looking at him, he hissed loudly:"it wasnt me! i wouldnt do anything to a pack member! it has big toothmar-!" but then exiloe made a face that told him it oviously wasnt him, he sighed, he dragged the corpse away from the compies, and behind a rock, he put dirt over its bodie, so the compies couldnt see, smell, or really feel it, and ran back, as he did , he encountered a mutant, it growled:"the rex has ran off to a carchas territory, and theres no-one here to protect you!" the mutant neared, flash growled:"think fast, mutant", flash jumped onto the mutants back with extreme speed and grabbed it by the neck with his jaws, he then slid them down onto the mutants underneck, the mutant fell over and slashed flash in the face, flash got angry, his father got killed by a raptor from that, flash roared:"youve gon to far, mutant!", and flash jumped on the mutant and stabbed his sickle claw into its windpipe, killing it, he ripped its flesh off a bit and called:compies, you can have your snack now", and flash ran towards the lake, the compies hungrily feeding on the mutants meat
The Kingpin says: please change that "Carcha[S]" bit. Spinos are understandable as pack hunters, since alone their jaws wouldn't be too useful against prey or other predators. but Carchas have close to perfect proportions and would no doubt be solitary predators. having a gang of carchas gang up on a Rex is going a bit too far, dont you think?
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chook151 on Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:48 am, edited 1 time in total.
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