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Postby chook151 » Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:57 am

"thats right, follow me, if you want to see your raptor friends again". sickle growled, he ran to where shard was hiding....

flash smelt something, he noticed that it was a very small carcha, just oversising him, dead(its name was flesh but it was killed by mutants minutes ago, uros newest son.),flash got back to the lake, ran over to exile, he barked at her about the carcha and hissed:"exile! a fresh carcha young bodie was found near the lake, it was killed by many sickle-like claws, i think we should return to the cave, the mutants are coming", before exile decided, flash ran back to where he saw blade last , noticing the dark shapes moving close to him and exile, he had to tell blade, for he wasnt strong enough.

[colour=cyan]PS.for noticing where blade was at the time i have changed this post, a bit,-chook151[/colour]
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Postby The Kingpin » Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:20 am

Crusher lunged forward, biting the small carcha on the tail, leaving a few small scratch marks. He decided to charge forward at a higher speed, and quickly started gaining ground on the Carcha...

Fatalis watched from above as a pack of mutants started closing in on the Alpha Female and Alpha Male. he was surprised they hadn't noticed them yet. he prepared himself for a lunge if one was to attack the female....her importance to him was to be taken above all other things. he couldn't let her be harmed....
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Postby chook151 » Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:38 am

shard jumped out, him and sickle roared at crusher, they roared:"we are warning you rex, your not in your territory anymore!,see for yourself!", uro saw them, and roared at the perch of the cliff, shaking a young giga looking for a fight in uros territory, the giga saw the rex, but couldnt see the carchas, it roared at crusher.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:57 am

Crusher snarled "I may not be in my territory anymore, but I have the right to fight the one who invaded my territory. Reveal yourself, Carcharodontosaur!". Crusher wasn't going to let small invasions like this go on any longer. for too long predators had walked in and out relatively easily when compared to other predators' territories. he was not going to let it continue, especially now that a raptor from a pack that had been his allies for long enough for them to be considered family, had been killed due to his layed back take on defence. Crusher made an incredibly loud challenging roar, shaking the insides of every creature around him...
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Postby chook151 » Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:04 pm

im making a new character, i allow KP to kill off my carcha buddies, i really do RP better with small dinos.

name:basher
age:32
species:ankylosaurus
gender:male
length:56 ft
height:12 ft
weight:5 tons
description:calm and kind, basher is nice to herbivores but a threat to predators,he grazes near the raptor pack, knowing that the lethal predators cannot pierce his thick carapace, and push him over because of his incredible weight.
personality:he likes living near raptor packs, because then the raptors can
get a large predators attention while he runs in the scrub, away from it.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sat Feb 24, 2007 12:26 pm

uuuh....not the Blade's pack...right? Crusher has a taste for ankys.... :P

Crusher watched as the Carchas stared at him, the one that he had smelled was keeping behind another one which had come up to protect it. the largest, Crusher's length, but half his height, was watching. the protector of the invader moved forward and snarled at him. Crusher roared "Let me have the attacker, or leave this territory. the choice is yours, but make it quick". at that, the Carcha lunged at him. Crushed moved back and thrust his head forward, countering it with a bite to the head. he dragged it to his right, and let go, the momentum of his pull sending it zooming past. Crusher then bit down on the tail of the Carcha, making it roar in pain. it shook it's tail loose, and turned around surprizingly quickly. it ducked, and bit upwards, catching Crusher on the chest. Crusher slammed his head down on it's back, making it let go. it swung it's head up, grabbing Crusher by the jaw. Crusher swung his head to the right, then to the left, then swung it straight down, splitting the Carcha's jaw in half, braking it. it made a shriek of pain, and Crusher put his foot on it's head, which was still on the ground. Crusher looked at the struggling Carcha, then at the Carcharodontosaurs around him, hiding in the trees, who were so shocked at how easily Crusher had disabled and weakened their pack mate, that they were frozen in place. Crusher made a territorial roar, before slamming his head down over the Carcha. he was surprized. for a predator with such bravery and seeming madness, it didn't put up much of a fight. he thought for a second whether or not it had any kind of strategy planned, that went wrong. the hiding Carchas proved that his hunch was correct. Crusher roared "Leave here. that is the price for killing one of my allies. this is now my territory". the Carchas started to snarl, but then went silent as a moan escaped the mouth of the thought-to-be-dead Carcha, on the ground by Crusher's feet. Crusher put his foot on it's spine, and snarled "He's dead. leave, or you will be as well". he then pushed down on the Carcha's spine, making a loud crack escape from the now broken bones. it was now definately dead. the Carchas, still in a state of shock, backed away, and left the area. Crusher ate a bit of the dead Carcha, before heading back to the dead raptor, to see what the raptors were going to do about it. he had already ended it. now, he wanted to see how the raptors were responding to the situation...
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Postby o-eternal-o » Sat Feb 24, 2007 9:45 pm

Exile looked startled at Flash, and was about to reply but he ran off again. Exile immediatly seeked out Blade. He was next to where the dead raptor lay. She growled to him silently, telling him that there could be mutants around. Blade shook his head, hoping it wasn't true, but his sense of smell did not fail him. He lifted his head, and sniffed the air slowly, in every direction.

"There are mutants all around us..." He hissed to Exile. She nodded in reply. That meant escape was not an option for now. The battle would have to commence before they could escape. Actually battling through the mutants was really not an option.

A shriek pierced the night, and the mutants made their presence known....
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Postby The Kingpin » Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:14 pm

Fatalis watched from above as the Mutants revealed themselves. they were hissing, snarling, and barking at eachother. Fatalis watched the Alpha Female and Alpha Male getting closer together, being surrounded from all corners with mutants. He decided to do a little trick to scare the mutants a bit. he made a loud bark, to attract the attention to him. it worked, and the mutants looked up at where the bark came from, but Fatalis was already in a tree about 15 feet away, making another bark and attracting more attention. he then ran through the trees toward the first tree he barked in, making a sort of conversation between himself, confusing the mutants. he then ran over to a tree on the other side of the small clearing they were in, and made yet another bark. after that, he ran through the trees towards the one directly over the leader of the mutants, and watched the confused raptors looking around, worried that they may have stumbled into a trap...

Crusher, a few hundred feet away, could hear barks. he started to speed up, since recently, he had had raptor problems, and was worried they may be the mutants again...
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Postby chook151 » Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:26 am

i didnt mean you could kill uro, he was going to be a threat later in the storyline, pretend the one you killed was shard, please.

basher was grazing silently, suddenly, a allosaurid came, it spotted him, it charged, basher dodged its charge attack and whamed in the side with his tail, the allo roared in pain, then basher rammed at its foot, the allo fell over due to the powerfull knock to the ankle, it couldnt get up, since basher wasnt a killer, he walked away, far enough so when the allo recovered, it wouldnt try to tackle him again.

flash was running through a feild, he didnt know where he was, he was near raptors, but not blades pack, he saw an allo severely damaged, lying on the ground, flash thought this would be easy prey, he jumped on its stomach, the allo tryed to bite him, but it was to weak, flash slashed its belly, and then jumped on its head, and stuck his sickle claw into the allos neck, it died, flash settled to feeding on his newly caught meal.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:30 am

You need to put something into account, Chook: animals dont hunt unless they're hungry. ever seen a shark attack someone after filling itself with Whale? definately not. now Flash, surrounded by enemies, should be thinking about how to get away alive, not attacking some random wounded allo knocked over by an Anky with turbo and nitro...
also, ask me to change small things like killed characters through PMs. it saves the RPG from being messed up.

Crusher charged forward, and could see the clearing a few hundred feet away. he was closing in...

Fatalis continued to confuse the raptors with barks, and some had started to run. the top raptors of the small pack stood their ground, and were looking around to try and find the cause of the sound. Fatalis saw one of the Alphas was on the edge of the ring, with a tree hanging over it. "Perfect..." he hissed quietly, and ran through the trees so that he was standing almost directly over the raptor's back. He jumped down, preparing for another jump as soon as he hit something solid, and swung his killed claws down, lodging them in the Alpha's spine, then launching himself upwards again, into the trees. "Wow...didn't think i could jump back up that fast" he hissed quietly. he looked down, to see the raptor on the ground, dead. the raptors stared at the tree he was in, and he decided to move. he weaved in and out of branches, going between them at a speed that would probably outdo many raptors on the ground. soon, he was on the other side of the clearing, and resumed his trick of barking to confuse the raptors more, to give the Alpha Female and Alpha Male time to figure out how to escape, or at least stall them long enough for the massive Rex, Crusher, to arrive at the scene...
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Postby Snowstalker » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:41 am

I find the females. One seems to be with thhe male, so, after introducing myself, I begin to court the other. This may be a new pack.

Also, I'm having a problem: An 80 foot rex would be far too slow to catch prey, let alone be the dominant predator on the island. Same with the super gigas, and an anky wouldn't need to be 50 feet long to be carnivore-proof. Euoplocephalus proves that.
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Postby Doc 42 » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:54 am

Hunt was walking through a feild/plain. He had been walking for days. His plan of finding a territory and Mate at the other side of the Island had been a complete failure. He had been constantly attacked and chased away. After a close encounter with a Rex he had ended up completely lost not knowing what way he came. He had survived by eating fish and any dyro to cross his path, but now he was really hungry.
@ Chook: LOL loved that last post. Super Ankey! dodgeing the most ageile predators we have Basher!. You do realise that ankeys legs were tiny and it weighed a couple of tons meaning its very slow and cumbersome.
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Postby chook151 » Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:10 am

ok, im not going to post for a month since everyones being mean, this kind of abuse bugs me like never before.

TT ses:Chook, you know you are acting very childish. We are not being mean to you, you just make stupid posts. Not every post has to be a fight scene! And your characters in the other RPGs are too overpowered! Now, DO NOT pollute these forums with your "Poor poor pitiful me." crap. Become a better RPGer, thats all I can say.
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Postby TyrantTR » Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:32 am

Diablo, also realising the dangers of a new pack, ran after Crusher still camoflauged. It may have been time to fight.
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Postby mega raptor » Sun Feb 25, 2007 4:49 am

I've got a bit of advice for Chook. First off, figure out how to give your characters weaknesses, and that means no extraordinary powers or size or something Gary-Stuish. Second off, develop them: give them a history, a motivation, a personality, some emotion, don't just describe their actions. And last, please, please become a little more mature in your posting.

Bronx stood on the beach, watching the tides. He was thinking, emotions conflicting in his mind, trying to force him down seperate paths. Do I leave here, he pondered, Or do I find somewhere else to go? This place did what it was supposed too, and now I had a further reason to press on. But I don't know where to go, and I don't intend to encroach on anyone's territory...

The Baryonyx thought it over. It was difficult, staying here at the place of his parent's deaths. Too difficult. He'd find somewhere else to go. Told 'ya you wouldn't be able to stay here, a voice in his head whispered. I knew that you wouldn't be able to stay. And it's good, really, that you leave. It's bad for you. Traumatic. And who knows what ideas it might give you? Bronx thought to growl a "shut up" to that voice, but right now, he wanted to just get to sleep. He would need energy if he was going to get across the island.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:39 am

I'm planning to take down Crusher's length by about 20-25 feet soon. i have recently seen how being a bit smaller and more vulnerable has actually made it more interesting. look at how i describe and play as Fatalis. THAT, is a type of Dino RPing i didn't even know until that fight scene against Shadow ages ago, when i took over ERC's characters for a short while during her absence. Chook, if you want people to like your RPing, you need to remember a few things:
Firstly: it's an Anky, not a Ferarri. it wouldn't be able to dodge an Allosaurus. it doesn't need to be 50 feet long to be safe. all that armour is enough to keep even a Rex's bite away!
Secondly: as mega raptor said, you need to develop your character. i think one of the things that made Crusher who he is is his story; his difficult past, his loss of a family and need of vengence against the cause behind it. his care for family and raising them as true predators, instead of the usual run, bit kill and eat, then sleep kind of predator. a predator that would inspire fear in the hearts of enemies. a predator that could easily be the most dominant predator. Crusher's care for family, his wisdom, his respect for all other predators who respect him equally, THAT, is what made Crusher what he is. that's why he's not being flamed for being too large. and Thank you SnowStalker. you, so far, are probably one of the very few who actually spoke his mind about any of my characters. im sure that alot of people arent too happy with a few aspects of my characters. however, few have actually said anything about it, and therefore, i havent been able to do anything about it, not knowing exactly what people didn't like.
Oh, BTW, chook: that little raptor pack you put in there, since you've abandoned it, is going to be killed off slowly, giving a chance for ERC to kill a few off as well. also, i have changed the fight with Uro. now, i've done what you asked for, you do what WE are asking for. go online, and read through some of the biger, more successful RPGs. better still, read some of the good ones on Jurassic Park Legacy.


Crusher closed in on the raptos, to find a mutant pack in confusion, looking around, lost. Crusher would've attacked, but he saw that there was apparently something already killing them off. something fast....very fast...

Fatalis was actually enjoying this. he saw it as a game.every time he saw the raptors home in on a particular tree, he'd rush to the other side of the clearing, and make a bark from the tree there, lsing them even more. he wouldv'e started to snigger, if this wasn't a truelly serious situation. he came up to another of the alphas, watching it from above, and jumped down, swinging his killer claws into it's spine, killing it, then jumping up again, back into the trees. he saw the raptor pack was slowly starting to fall apart. many of the raptos had run, and Fatalis was barking at the ones who stayed from so many different places they thought they had an entire raptor pack sitting in the trees, preparing to attack. Fatalis barked at the Alpha Female he was tracking, attracting her attention. he looked at her face. his gueses were right. she was a relative. before she could really soak in the fact that he was a relative, he ran through the trees to the other side of the clearing. she wouldn't have had the time to pin point which of her relatives he was. his face would be enough to make her remember her old pack...her family...
"Time to scare these raptors off for good..." snarled Fatalis quietly. he made attack shrieks instead of barks, moving through the trees as he did earlier. the attack shrieks meant that an attack was eminent, and it would quickly scare the raptors off...
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Postby Dinonerd » Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:49 am

Mind if i join?

Name: Destrelius
Age: 24
Species: Tyrannosaurus Rex
Length: 58 feet
Gender: Female
Height: 24 feet
Weight: 9 tons

Personality: An extremely aggresive creature, attacks any living thing whether she is hungry or not. Unless she is in the mating season, or has a nest, she will guard it with her life if she has too. But will not risk unnecessary fights while she has babies.

Description: An almost black colour, with dark green stripes and large yellow eyes. At night she looks like a pair of floating eyes. She is trying to rise the ranks to be the most powerful animal on the land. She has nothing unusual about here except her teeth are a bit larger then most tyrannosaurs and she has a stronegr bite then most.
Hear her roar
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:22 pm

of course not! welcome to the RPG! :D

BTW: a suggestion for all members of the ISSRPG:
why not i put the descriptions of ALL our characters in the first post, with the appropriate player name above the Character? please answer via PM.

Crusher walked forward, and watched as the Mutants quickly started barking commands to eachother to run. before he knew it, only 3 raptors remained. he walked forward, getting closer, and listened...

Fatalis made a series of hisses, scaring the raptors even more. with 2 kills already without them even knowing the cause, he was ahead. one of the three, in panic, looked at the Alpha Female, and attacked. before it could get close enough to her, it was on the ground, squealing in pain, shrieking to the other raptos for help, pinned to the ground, it's side pierced with the pure obsidian coloured claws of a black Velociraptor with white tiger stripes, it's amber eyes piercing the darkness, slits thin. it's head was decorated by a small quill crest unlike any other raptors', mutant or otherwise. it' eyelids were a bright red colour, which seemed to fade a few seconds after the attack. the remaining 2 mutants started to walk towards him, teeth bared, and claws at the ready. The raptor started barking orders to attack, which made the last 2 of the raptors stop dead in their tracks. after a single attack shriek came from the raptor, they fled in fear. "Idiots..." grunted Fatalis...

Crusher watched in wonder. that lone raptor had successfully scare off an entire pack of mutants, which were originally thought to be extremely intelligent.
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Postby o-eternal-o » Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:50 pm

Exile nearly shrieked with suprise, but the raptor turned away too quickly.

"I know that raptor...." She hissed to herself. The shock of it had hit her. Who was he? Why did she remember him? Memories of her old pack started flooding back to her mind. But a shriek from in front of her brought her back to her senses. The mutant leaped towards her to attack, but before she had chance to react, the mystery raptor appeared from nowhere, killing the mutant.

Exile started in wonder at the raptor before her, its back facing her.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:05 pm

Fatalis looked at the Alpha Female for a second, and hissed "Sorry for interrupting. it didn't really look like a fair fight, and i got carried away with it....i enjoyed myself a bit too much with that one...". he then turned away, and was about to head for the jungle, until he heard a loud growl. when he looked at the source, he saw the massive Tyrannosaur, Crusher, staring down at him. "Dont move!". Fatalis hissed "Dont worry Crusher. regardless of my appearance, i am not a mutant. im sure Exile would've killed me immediately if i was...arent i right, Exile?". Crusher looked over at Exile, to see a thoughtful, emotional expression on her face. she was thinking of something that had obviously left a mark on her....
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