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Postby Hopeflower » Sat Apr 28, 2007 2:49 pm

Steeltalon shot a glance at Goldfang. "Are you sure it wasn't Riptide?" she growled to him. "He was black with vertical gold stripes and orange eyes. If it was him...I'll kill him, I swear I'll kill him."

She turned her gaze to Berserk, the tyrannosaur. He was much smaller than Crusher, but any help was welcome at that moment.

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And now, introducing...Riptide and some of his pack!

Name: Riptide
Age: 28 years
Species: Velociraptor
Length: 6 feet
Height: 5 feet
Personality: calm, cold and calculationg. never attacks unless angry or provoked. when angry, his stripes turn brightest yellow and his skin turns to a steely gray.
Description: black with vertical gold stripes. orange eyes. when angry, his stripes turn brightest yellow and his skin turns to a steely gray. his killing toes are larger than most, and are solid black.
History: Riptide killed most of Steeltalon's old pack. He is still alive, even after Steeltalon last attacked him. He has sworn to kill all of her allies and family before finally turning on her.

Name: Riverscar
Age: 27 years
Species: Velociraptor
Length: 5 feet
Height: 4 feet
Personality: Silent. An excellant ambusher.
Description: light gray, almost blue, with one long scar down his back. When angered, his color turns to a dark, stormy gray. His killing toes are narrow and unusually white.
History: Riverscar is the son of Amberclaw and Whiplash, two of Riptide's former packmembers. He was abandoned at a young age because he was not a born mutant, like Steeltalon, but Riptide took him in anyway after finding out Riverscar was still alive.
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Postby Doc 42 » Sat Apr 28, 2007 3:58 pm

Sandstorm laughed as Steeltalon sped off and barked "I told you she didnt like us" Softfoot watched Steeltaon disappeaer with a look of amusement on her face. "Well it just proves one thing.... She is completely nuts"
They both laughed. turned and headed back home.
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Postby Hopeflower » Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:15 pm

Riptide led the raptors through the stream with Riverscar at his shoulder. The smaller raptor was more agressive than Riptide, but that didn't mean Riverscar was faster.

Steeltalon sniffed the air, a snarl ripping from her as she recognised one of the scents. "It IS Riptide!" she spat. "I'm gonna kill them all!" She made a move to leap up into the trees, but she was held back by one of the Lone Wolves.

"How cute," Riptide growled. "It's little Steeltalon." He glared down at her through narrowed eyes. "She killed Night. She's grown strong." His eyes traced the long scar he'd given her. "She's fought tyrannosaurs and spinos, by the looks of her scars. I don't know that Rex, though. I have no idea what his weaknesses are. That'll be a problem."

"What does it matter?" growled Riverscar. "We take out Steeltalon and the Lone Wolves, and then we run away." Riptide gave an amused growl.

"Easier said than done. We have no idea how much of a fight they'll put up," Riptide hissed. He was aware that Steeltalon was staring into his eyes with a hostility that made even him shiver slightly.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:22 pm

Crusher was hungry, and had headed off to the game trail, near where he had killed Thrasher, his arch Nemesis, years ago. when he arrived, he saw several dark shapes moving towards the edge of the river near Thrasher's skeleton. he knew what they were. Mutants. and from what he could smell, they were stalking Fatalis...and his friends, apparently...

Fatalis hissed "We need to lure them deeper into Crusher's territory. we can try and call Crusher, but it may or may not work". Fatalis then picked up a scent on the wind. it was unmistakeable. 2 scents. one of the mutants, and the other of one particular Tyrannosaur. Crusher. he barked "Crusher! he's here!". next thing they heard was an ear splitting roar as Crusher spotted the mutants. it was obviously enough to get their attention, as Fatalis noticed a wave of movement on the edge of the small area of forest they were in. they had been surrounded, but Crusher had saved their lives. Fatalis barked "Trees! into the trees!". he then jumped upwards as he watched Crusher walk forward towards the mutants, his skin changing colour to a frightening blue/grey, with royal blue and orange stripes, his snout muscle cavities turning red, as did his usually bluish eyes. another earth-shaking roar left his mouth, and he walked forward. "Leave! now! or i'll make sure none of you leave this place alive!". the Raptors hissed and looked at him, and started spreading out, as if trying to encircle him. Crusher charged forward, surprising them. they split just in time and 5 of them lunged onto his sides, and started trying to cut into his skin. it was causing a bit of a sting, but it wasn't serious. Crusher crouched, then rolled, crushing the Raptors under his weight. he looked at them and roared "i'll give you 3 seconds, to turn around and leave my territory, or else your fates will be the same as the ones you now see on the ground!". the Raptors hissed and backed off a bit, then started advancing again. Crusher could see some movement in the trees, and he knew who it was. the Lone Wolves...

Fatalis barked "Attack!". the Lone Wolves leaped onto the opponents viciously, Fatalis slashing through as many as he could, using the slash-and-jump technique to hit several one after the other. he was about to attack a 6th Raptor when it tailwhipped him to the ground, and hissed "Fatalissssssssss......We meet again....". "No...not you..." hissed Fatalis. his one and only surviving relative from Thrasher's attack. Echo, his brother. his older brother, and the pack's most skilled fighter and hunter. Named for his ability to make enemies think he was somewhere else before he attacked...
Echo hissed "Thatsssss right, Fatalisssss......Echo....your brother....remember me? well, i dont think you'll have time to remember if you haven't already!". right then, he dropped unconscious, Razorclaw standing behind him, a saw lower jaw having just been slammed into the back of the Raptor's head to knock it out cold. the sight around him was stunning. several of either side lay on the ground, some dead, others dying. Crusher was ripping through the Raptors like nothing he had ever seen before, leaving several with missing upper or lower halves, contrary to what he expected. Berserk the Rex was also killing a few. The Lone Wolves were quite fairly matched with the Mutants, though Fatalis knew that the true leaders, probably only 7 or 8, the original pack members, the ones who wanted his head, were far more skilled than these. the Mutants retreated, having been successfully ambushed this time. among them was a bleeding Raptor. Fatalis thanked Razorclaw for saving his life. had Echo been given another moment, Fatalis would've been killed, as would anyone who got in the way. Crusher shot off in pursuit for a couple of kilometers, killing a couple of Raptors on the way, before stopping and returning to the Lone Wolves. he growled "Where's Fatalis?". the Lone Wolves looked in Fatalis' direction to see him trying to find a way to keep his brother pinned to the ground so that he wouldn't manage to get up when he awoke. they had some questions for him. Crusher growled "Let me carry him" Fatalis moved out of the way, and Crusher lifted him, then moved over to a boulder nearby, and put Echo's limp body down, and rolled the boulder onto his tail, to prevent him from moving when he woke up. he growled "That should be enough". Fatalis thanked Crusher, and watched Echo, waiting for him to wake up. Crusher decided he'd stay there and watch over them. he noticed a Rex nearby, which had helped in the fight by killing a few Raptors. he went over to the Rex and growled "Who are you, Tyrannosaur?", and then waited for a reply. the whole time he noticed the several of the Lone Wovles looking at him in pure awe...

Guys, so you know, I would appreciate someone asking before hijacking my plots and characters...if it happens again, i'll have Tornado eat the character of the player responsible for it alive.
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Postby Hopeflower » Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:46 pm

Riptide growled, slinking around Crusher and behind Steeltalon. She whipped around, catching him in the face with one of her steel-gray claws. She jumped him and the two rolled over in a scramble of legs and tails, both trying to bite the other's neck first. Steeltalon's jaws clamped on Riptide's tail, and he shrieked in pain. He scrambled up seconds after Steeltalon did.

Steeltalon's jaws dripped with blood, some of it her own. She bared her fangs to the fullest at Riptide. He flinched, seeming to remember them sunk in his tail. Riverscar took the opportunity and leaped at Steeltalon, but she turned too fast and hurled him to the ground. In the second it took her to turn back to Riptide, Riverscar died.

Riptide stared at the motionless body of Riverscar, dropping his guard for a second. In that precious moment, Steeltalon rammed him with her shoulder, sending him to the ground. She said nothing, merely moved her killing toe to a perfect position to slash Riptide's throat open. But first...

"Why did you kill my mother and father?!" she shrieked at Riptide. "Why did you kill Tigerstripe?!"

"They were mere obstacles in my way," Riptide snarled.

Steeltalon's face took on a saddened expression. "You, Riverscar and the rest of your pack could've been honored raptors," she spat. "Instead, you chose to kill others for a living. It got YOU killed!" Steeltalon lunged forward, sinking her teeth into Riptide's arm while sliding her killing toe into his throat. He choked on his own breath and slowly died. When his eyes finally glazed over, Steeltalon sank to the ground. A victory screech ripped from her throat, ringing in the air for several seconds after.

The second in command of the raptor pack took one look at Crusher, at Riptide and Riverscar's motionless forms and the Lone Wolves that were ready to kill them all and barked a retreat. Steeltalon watched the mutants fleeing before allowing her head to fall to the ground. She was exhausted from her fight with Riptide and Riverscar.
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Postby Doc 42 » Sat Apr 28, 2007 7:14 pm

A roar cut through Sandstorm and softfoots ears. He growled out in panic"U-Rex!" Softfoot corrected him "Crusher, normal rex, crusher"
He replied "oh ya I forgot, im still used to running away whenever I hear that roar" they entered the forset and made their way back to the cave.
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Postby Iceking » Sat Apr 28, 2007 10:34 pm

Name:green eye
Age:12
Species:Tyrannosaurus rex
length:9 meters
weight:7 tons

Personality:He can be friendly when he wants to. he is hard to anger. when he is angry, he will fight with all his strenght. however, he will not fight unless he needs to protect his kill or defend himself.

Description:his eyes are dark green in color. his body is the same shape as a normal rex. his head is a dark red color and his body is also dark red.on his left leg, there is a brown stripe, similair to a tiger stripe. his right leg is the same red color as his head.
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Postby Hopeflower » Sat Apr 28, 2007 10:39 pm

Steeltalon opened her eyes and groaned as she stood up, aching all over from her injuries. She looked only once at Riptide's body before staggering over to Fatalis. She noticed a raptor pinned down by a boulder. She said nothing about it, instead choosing to remain silent for a moment. Steeltalon blinked, remembering overhearing what Softfoot had said about her.

"Listen, about what Softfoot said. She lied completely. I might be hard to get along with sometimes, but I would never betray someone I trust, or anyone that they trust. It's just being loyal, something Softfoot could never understand. No one could ever really understand me, not unless I wanted them to. That's something my mother told me. She said you're only as much at ease with others as they are with you." She paused before adding, "You look troubled. What's wrong?"
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Postby Legendary Elite » Sat Apr 28, 2007 11:23 pm

*FLASHBACK*
Goldfang ran forward and brought down an ultra within seconds. He heard a loud roar and Crusher arrive on the scene. They were right, he was freakin huge! He shuddered at the sight of the enormous colossal Tyrannosaur. He saw Crusher ripping through the Ultraraptors and Megaraptors as if they were nothing. For now there was a battle to be won. He saw an Ultra come close, trying to attack him by surprise while he was distracted. He spotted it in time and turned around. the Ultra lunged but when it did Goldfang countered by leaping into the air and was coming down on it, sickle claws ready along with claws as they prepared to swing forward and grapple with the mutant head on...
*FLASHBACK*

"I am Berserk." He said to Crusher suprised by his size. "You're Crusher, I've heard about you. And so the legends were true it seems..." He growled before turning to watch the scene. The Lone Wolves were tending to their wounds and feeding on the Ultra and Megaraptor corpses...
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Apr 29, 2007 12:40 pm

Fatalis hissed "That Raptor...the one pinned by the boulder.....that's my brother....Echo....i thought he was dead....and now he wants me dead....im forced to question and kill my own brother to end this threat to me and my friends...a brother i used to see as a prime role model, my closest and most beloved relative after my mother and father, who were killed in the attack...and now i'll have to kill him after i get what i need to know...i...i dont think i can do it". his brother was the one who taught him the high jump technique. without that, he wouldn't be able to get into trees with a single jump. it was Echo who cared for him on late nights when his parents were out hunting for Triceratops hatchlings. it was Echo who calmed him on late nights during thunderstorms while his loving parents were asleep and unaware of his fear. it was Echo who taught him how to scare enemies into thinking he had a pack with him when he was alone...it was Echo who taught him how to be stealthy....it was Echo's lessons which made Fatalis as skilled as he was...

Crusher growled "that means what?". Crusher looked at the Lone Wolves who were licking their wounds, drinking from the small stream, and eating some of the dead Ultras, which, although mutated, were quite healthy to eat. Mutant flesh was known for improving the eater's abilities just as the water would, but it wasn't as effective and it didn't have the insanity side-effect that the Polluted Lake to the north east had...
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Postby Hopeflower » Sun Apr 29, 2007 1:10 pm

Steeltalon let out a murmur of sympathy. "Would you like me to kill him after you have the information you need?" she offered. She blinked and added, "I know it's painful to lose family members. But at some point...we have to let them go."
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Postby Legendary Elite » Sun Apr 29, 2007 1:30 pm

Goldfang heard the cries of victory from Steeltalon as she just killed Riptide. He grinned at the thought. Most of the raptors were dead now. The allies had one the battle without much loss. One last elite ultra raptor made a deadly leap at Goldfang but he was ready and he counter attacked with his tail, whipping out and hitting the raptor in midair. He walked over to the ultra as it scramble back up and stabbed it in the back with his sickle claw. He then reached down and broke the Ultra's neck with his fangs. He let out a warcry of victory. This battle had been won.

*a few minutes later...*
Goldfang saw the Steeltalon, Fatalis along with Crusher. He walked over to them. "If Echo tries to hide the secret lair of the Ultras he is sadly mistaken. I happened to find where they were hiding on my way back. Their leader is hiding there with over 50 raptors, this includes Megaraptors, Oviraptors and Acrocanthosaurs. His lair is an enormous cavern that leads into an underground cave system. Its not an underwater cave but it is made by the humans but abandoned. And now their nests cover the cavern." He growled. And looked up at Crusher. "So Crusher, you are the mighty rex everyone talks about. I am honored to meet you Crusher and are in your debt. Even though I warned everyone of the ambush, without you, we would've lost. I thank you for the assistance Crusher." He hissed. Berserk was eating a dead Megaraptor with some of the other Lone Wolves. Berserk walked over to the commander. "Hello Goldfang, its been a while friend." he growled. "Yes it has been, Berserk." growled Goldfang as he waited for Crusher to reply...

OoC: Sorry KP for rushing things. I'll try to fix up any errors as best i can. Oh and if Echo IS actually with you, Goldfang cannot see him.
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Postby Iceking » Sun Apr 29, 2007 3:01 pm

green eye woke from his long sleep. he was thirsty and hungry. he would find food later, first, he would drink. he was near a river that ran through the center of the island. after his thirst was quenched, he wandered to the area he had been sleeping in and found a nanotyrannus sleeping there. green eye hid himself in an area with many trees to make his red look black so if the nano woke up, it would hopefully think he was just a large rock. after waiting for a few seconds, green eye dashed out without roaring. the nano felt the shaking and woke up. it was terrified to see a rex charging at it. green eye killed it instantly by crushing the skull. green eye settled down and began to eat his meal.
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:20 pm

Crusher nodded in response to the seemingly gold-toothed raptor. he looked at the Ultraraptor and Megaraptor corpses. 12 kills, and 5 losses. fairly even, but Crusher was surprised because the majority of those 10 kills, probably up to 7 of them, were his. still, it wasn't bad. Crusher hoped that these weren't the only Lone Wolves around. otherwise, they'd struggle to kill off the Mutants without being wiped out themselves if the Ultraraptors managed to lure them into a place he couldn't reach...

Fatalis hissed "No....if...if anyone is to kill one of my relatives....i should. if another raptor kills him, even if it's my closest friend...vengence would push me to the point where i'd kill them...". Fatalis was in a difficult position. if he killed Echo, he'd hate himself for the rest of his life. but if he let anyone else do it, he'd keep attacking them until they were dead out of shear rage at what they had done. a mistake here could push him into insanity. Razorclaw hissed "Maybe you wont have to". Fatalis hissed "What do you mean?". Razorclaw growled "Well, when he came to attack you, i could see he was hesitating. his behaviour, the look in his eyes, the way he reacted to you...he doesn't want to kill you. but he thinks he has no choice. if we can show him another way...maybe he'll join us. he's probably been brainwashed by the elders in your old pack into believing it was your fault. deep down, i doubt he really believes it's you who caused that attack". Fatalis stayed silent, taking this new possibility into account....
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Postby Hopeflower » Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:58 pm

Steeltalon tipped her head to one side. "I can respect your decision, Fatalis," she barked. "If he really didn't want to kill you, I don't understand why he joined the patrol sent to kill us all." She looked around her cautiously. "Do you think maybe he was forced to attack us? Most of these mutants probably weren't, but I could tell some of them really didn't want to fight us. Perhaps Riptide's brother bullied them into submission."
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Postby The Kingpin » Sun Apr 29, 2007 6:43 pm

Fatalis hissed "Perhaps...but i somehow doubt Riptide's family is leading the pack. most likely, the leader of my old pack is still in charge. if he's not dead, that is...Reaper....the most ruthless Raptor we've ever known. he left nothing alive if it got in the way of what he wanted. of course, back when i was younger, he was seen as a hero. he had taken on a Suchomimus alone and won. he'd taken on Albertosaurs, Ceratosaurs, Therizinosaurs, Rexes, all sorts of large predators, and won against all odds. his greed was boundless, however. once, when he was hungry, he killed one of the Females in the pack just to get enough room to eat...". his memories were painful...

Crusher growled "Reaper...hmm....i'll need to find out more about this raptor from a friend of mine...". Fatalis looked at him, puzzled, but remained silent...
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Postby Doc 42 » Sun Apr 29, 2007 6:50 pm

Sandstorm and Softfoot walked into the clearing, tired from their journey. Darktooth and Shadowleaf ran out to greet them. Clawfist came out behind them with a happy look on his face. Whcich was odd since Quicktooth was hurt at the moment and he was ussally sad when she was in any sort of pain.
He grinned and barked "Last four oviraptors.... dead. One of them tried to kill quicktooth while she was injured we slashed him and followed the trail of blood back to the others." The pack laughed and walked into the cave.
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Postby Iceking » Sun Apr 29, 2007 7:05 pm

green eye had left the area where he slept and killed the nano. as he was wandering, saw a blue/orange daspletosaurus feeding off of a recently killed edmontosaurus. he ignored it because he knew that it would be busy feeding for a while. after wandering for 4 miles, he smelled a large group of raptors and 2 rexes. simply out of curiosity, he began to follow the scents, he hid amongst trees so he wouldn't be seen and possibly attacked.
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Postby Legendary Elite » Mon Apr 30, 2007 8:30 am

Goldfang nodded. Fatalis would surely hate it if he killed one of his family, no matter how deadly or dangerous they were. And Goldfang was certainly not about to do that or else he'd might as well end up in Crusher's stomach. He sighed. "If you really want to know about Reaper, I will tell you. It's a long story though but I should tell you this that Reaper, is my father. He is possibly one of the strongest raptors known in existence and ever since he became an Ultra has brought shame on me and my family of elite raptors. And I plan to punish him with death, he is not so much my father but arch-nemesis. He killed my mother and family. I am the only survivor. I already know where his lair is but it is extremely guarded. We can get if we are going to take him and his pack down for good. Trust me, Reaper is not someone to be trifled with, he maybe a mad raptor but he is very smart and cunning. He is...the full extent of what you might call evil. He was named Reaper because of his constant winning streak. He was undefeatable. Nothing can or could stop him. He has now become something that could be hardly classified as a raptor. If you were to name him by something, I would suggest Giga Raptor is the word. He is the "Bringer of Death", possibly even more terrifying than Crusher here. If we are going to fight then only I will be the one to kill my father, this is personal but I need your help. I know this battle has been tough on us already I am sure. I know that many of us have lost loved ones in all this...." He said before taking a breath before continuing. "If we are going to win this war, this battle, this fight. Then the road ahead of us will not be the easy one to take. Reaper is not going to let us just walk in there without a fight to the death. He and his pack of mutated carnivores are going to try to stop and kill all who try to reach that cave and get inside...." He said and began to raise his voice as everyone began to listen in. "But do ya know what I say to that? I say we've won this fight here and I think its time we ended this for good!!! Today we fight for Isla Sorna!!!!" He screeched out loud. He wanted to take the fight to Reaper. Once Reaper was dead, that would mean the defeat of one of the most powerful Ultra packs on the island. Goldfang was one of the strongest raptors on the island with his father's instincts passed on as well as strength. He would be of good use in this time. He waited to hear an answer from the others...

OoC: Is it alright if I just make a fourth character for now? I am going to create Reaper.

Name: Reaper
Gender: Male (Alpha Male/Patriarch)
Species: Ultra Raptor
Length: 8 feet
Height: 5 feet
Personality: Corrupted, mad, but all the same a great leader and malicous mastermind.

Description: Goldfang's father who became corrupted after drinking from a lake infested with mutant drug within it. His body has ravaged overtime and has made fast, extremely deadly and very dangerous. He has fought even the mightiest Spinosaur too. He was friends with the Spinos leader Thrasher. Now he is a powerful general and has an extremely large pack of Ultras who have now built their nests in his lair. His raptors consist of as many as 40 or more. He is probably the most terrifying of his species. He has crimsons scales running along him with pitch black stripes as well black eyes. His eyes are what scare even the mightiest animals. His name was given to him was because he had been able to win a fight against anything and remained undefeated. He has even fought a Giganotosaurs off without a scratch which is why some give him the title of "The Bringer of Death". He will either kill his enemies or corrupt them with his evil twisted mind by forcing them to drink out of water that is corrupted with mutant genes. Reaper has drank an humongous overdose of the mutant genes and it has turned him into something beyond imagination. Along his head runs set of extremely long feather membranes showing he is a male. His fangs and claws a are extremely sharp and his sickle claws are curved like they have been sharpened to the extent and are deep black. His tail is long and black with white dots running along it. His spine is covered with spikes that stick up and curve back. He is the raptor no one wants to cross paths with. His plans are to make Ultras the dominant carnivores on Isla Sorna. The mutant gene has enhanced him greatly over time.

Edit: Sorry KP, I did not know about the whole dino army thing. If there is ANYTHING else here that I messed up on, you might have to edit it cause I have school on today. Sorry KP. I did not rush it this time though. I just Reaper would be a raptor, not like a Dragon, that was not how i intended him to be. But rather as something that looks terrifying after having a very large overdose of that mutant drug. If you are not happy with that then I have changed him. I only needed to remove the horns if that is fine. Everything else about him seems quite logical and yet terrifying. The mutant gene especially with the large overdose has enhanced him greatly making him one raptor you don't want to cross paths with. He would be the fear inside every enemy.
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Postby Hopeflower » Mon Apr 30, 2007 10:57 am

Steeltalon growled low in her throat. "This is all wonderful, but I don't think any of us want control over Isla Sorna. I for one just want to get back to my regular life without fear of the mutants. All we have to do is scare them into leaving us alone, which Crusher should be able to do. Since Goldfang is the only one who knows where the cave is, I suggest that Crusher and Goldfang, plus maybe five of the stronger raptors, should go to the mutant's cave and either scare them away or wipe out the pack." She looked up at Crusher, wondering how he would react to her plan. She was careful to keep her voice low, so that any listening mutants nearby wouldn't catch onto their plans.
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